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as usual beautiful work! 

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I really liked this game! There are some issues I wanted to point out however.

-It is unclear to what point our main character is tired, so I can't know at what point she's closer to a breakdown

-I dislike the way the endings work, if I decide to re-establish a relationship with someone else, I can get an ending with them sure, but that won't allow me to do things like joining the organization fighting for equality, so that kinda makes me go through a complicated procedure of intentionally not being able to pay rent after knowing of the organization while not having a breakdown in the process, which is kind of complicated and gets me to another point.

-If I have a breakdown and the other version of me comes in to help me, if I refuse her help, the game ends, instead of continuing as if nothing happened, why is that? You could've just made it so that after drinking that cup I would be back to normal and after refusing to travel with my other me, I would be back in the apartment as if nothing happened, why leave the game in such an ambiguous ending instead? 

Lastly, considering the open endings, it really made me think this game has potential for a sequel, but for some reason you would rather make a spin-off of the archivist world set in somewhere else? Why is that? I really would like to see the continuation of the story of our unfortunate archivist in her fight against a unfair and unjust world. 

This game is so good it left me feeling awed...😭Which engine did you use to make this? I'd like to try it out

Thanks! The engine used is dendry.

Thank you! I tried learning dendry, but unfortunately I am having some issues with downloading, would you mind lending me some help? (ps I checked the guide and tried multiple different methods, but they all fail...T^T

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hello i love this story so much, coming back to play it again. much love from a fellow trans person<3

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This is so good. I saw every plot element mirrored in our real world... Very grim, but life goes on.
Also, music is good and fits the mood of the story well.

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teared up multiple times playing this because it hit home. i wanted to check out the other endings for myself but i supposed i dont have the guts to. thank you for creating this game

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Is this part of the pageantverse (em - emily)

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Em is kind of an AU version of Emily. But I don’t think it’s part of the Pageantverse, not yet, anyway.

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Hey Autumn, just wanted to notify you that I left a review of the archivist game with some criticism.

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Sorry for bothering again but ocukd you please look at my review?

Thank you for playing and reviewing the game. For what it’s worth, I’m not really updating the game anymore.

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Thx for replying!


I know the game won't be updated anymore, but I was wondering why a potential new game in this universe won't be a sequel to the storyline of this game.

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"The Archivist and the Revolution" got reviewed by the arcane cache, a underground blog for underground games:


„The game and its world are well created – not only in the sense that it contains many creative ideas that go beyond the (also present) science-fiction cliches, but also since it does a really good job to depict the struggles and predicaments of the protagonist – the descriptions and structures feel inherent logical and very natural, and even though many of today’s many pressing matters are thematised, it never feels tokenistic doing so ... The Archivist and the Revolution“ is a well realized, highly political piece of hyperlink fiction that doesn’t need to hide behind most of the contemporary commercial science fiction stories I’ve read in the past few years; its direct language, its naturalist approach, the – rather pronounced – gameplay elements, and its clear political agenda make it enjoyable to underground gaming enthusiasts and a larger audience alike."


Well done!

https://thunderperfectwitchcraft.org/arcane_cache/2024/04/10/the-archivist-and-t...

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Profoundly sad but showing the important angle, it hurts but it needs to exist. А bit confusing with names being just single letters, but you know what i don't even care, bc the rest of it is amazing. 

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this game is freakin amazing. ending i got made me feel like a cowardly slimeball. might not be able to play again. 10/10

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such a beautiful, heartbreaking story

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This was painful to play through, but it was also incredibly cathartic. Thanks for making this.

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Got the first ending. I feel like even when this pandemic ends, this game would remain more and more relevant. Thanks for making it and the postmortem is great.

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I loved it! Got the 2nd ending! I don’t know if I want to try others, i’m sure that’s the one I want!

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cyberpunk settings (if that's even an accurate description) are so cool. very immersive story/game. would love to see more in this particular setting

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Now that rating is over, I can comment here and tell you how much your story dragged me into it and left me memories I’ll cherish for a long time. Thank you for this precious piece of art

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I love this