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This was a good read given awkwardness is hard to write evocatively!  Also, now I'm hungry.

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Ugh, this feels too real. I love it. I’m also glad I got to hang out with Emily again…

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Very enjoyable read! The social anxiety bit with the other kids felt relatable...

I skipped Pageant, but I think I found both endings :D

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sequel!

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I loved Pageant, so when I saw this was the sequel, I had to play it! This was a really lovely little meditation (probs not using that word in the right context) on socializing and human relationships, as well as a perfect example of why the phrase "distance makes the heart grow fonder" isn't exactly correct. It was all very relatable and this was a wonderful game. (I probably make little to no sense right now because my brain feels like tenderized chicken meat, lol.) 

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Played Pageant and this one, really great the whole way through!

[Spoilers below!! at least how I played it]

The awkwardness of our heroine through the party, the quiet moment with Emily outside (which was very cute btw!), the sense of doom I felt when people started talking about politics at the table haha, and sealing it all off with a New Year's kiss/hug (and the noncommittal "it was fine" in the car w/ mom). Great scenes that felt very relatable!

I like your writing style a lot. A mix of introspection, overthinking, and realistic dialogue that I think fits the story you're telling well! Looking forward to your future works :) stay safe!

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yes. good, good stuff. also shoutout to another Hennessey fan. I bet I butchered that.

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this felt so nice to read. i enjoyed the pacing and how you portrayed the awkwardness and insecurities.. it makes me happy to see and relate. thank you for creating this beautiful little story. ♥️

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I really enjoyed the commentary on conversations as transactional, which is sort of the perfect thing to explore in a choice-based game like this. I thought this was a really lovely vignette that conjured all the complicated emotions of a big holiday like New Year's and I'm glad I took the time to play it.